This is a very smooth and pretty emote! Pretty is actually a fairly important quality because it shows that you took the time to polish it up before submitting it. I have two minor recommendations for this piece: First, the brown thing that drops that the purple guy runs into (which is great physical comedy) doesn't go all the way down, and I don't know if that was intentional or not but that little space was bugging me just a tiny bit. Again, no biggie. The second recommendation is that this emote would be PERFECT if it looped - which, I understand, is difficult. However, in general the animation would look, as a whole, a lot smoother with even just the purple guy shaking himself off and bouncing offscreen to reset the emote. The little scene depicted in this emote is hilarious, and the physical comedy came out great, so nice job!

^Again with the fail. Critique as a comment.

~Alex

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I'd have to agree it looks nice but would look better iff you added a couple more frames to get the blue guy off screen

Thanks for the supportive yet honest critique, again! I think I have an idea of how I might just finish this one out that'll make it loop. However, I won't be started on it until late tonight or tomorrow.

As for the falling door, that little white space was actually supposed to be the metal plate footer on the door, but it obviously wasn't dark enough to distinguish itself from a space. I'll darken that up so it's a proper metal gray bottom to the door.

Again, thank you!

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Yeah, I'll be looking into a proper ending that'll loop the entire scene around.

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Very nice I lol'd

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Thanks! It's probably going to get ooooone more update before I'll say it's finally finished. Just need to loop it appropriately.

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Yeah, I thought it was missing something

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You're welcome!

~Alex

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